Shimmering sprinkling spreading magic,
Wipes away all that’s tragic.
Darkest deadly clouds,
Couldn’t beat the colours around.
Different coloured strings,
Joy it always brings.
A path to heaven,
Just remember the number is seven.
Subsides everyone’s pain,
It’s the best gift of the rain.
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Hi everyone!
This one’s inspired by recent weather in my area (topic is suggested by a friend, though). I hope you enjoyed this one.
How is weather in your area? How are you feeling? Let me know in the comments section as I would love to hear from you.
See you soon. Cheers!
Vidah.
It is hot in kochi
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Summerđđď¸đĽ
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We are having rains almost daily. Love your rainbow poem.
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Oh, it’s same here.
Thank you!
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Youâre welcome
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What a beautiful poem V!
Full of imagination.
Yes weather is same here
It rained on Thursday.
Yesterday it was cloudy. But I haven’t seen any rainbow đ.
It’s due to pollution I guess
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Thank you, D (For the suggestion too).đ
Pollution destroys these sweet pleasuresđ
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You are not supposed to mention that!!
Keep sharing.
Expecting more from you. âşď¸
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haven’t seen a rainbow in while.
a lovely poem, Vidah.
so full of hope and colorâ¨đ¤
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Hope you see one soon!
Thank you đ
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you welcome, and thank you tooâ¨
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Beautiful lines! Rainbow! đđ
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Thank you đ
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âşď¸
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Most lovely wording as inspiring to be happy.a lovely one poem,dear Chavi!!đâ¤ď¸đ
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Thank youâ¤
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Much welcome,dear Chavi!!â¤đâ¤
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Gorgeous Vidah! đ
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Thank you, Cindyđ
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You’re most welcome!!! đ
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It’s very rainy here in Kenya and loved the poem!
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Seems it’s raining everywheređ¤ˇââď¸
Thank you!
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My pleasure and yes it seems like it.
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Hi Vidah,
Here also it was raining in the last five days.
The temperature was comparatively low between 20 to 25 °C.
I was not liking this rainy weather in the summer season, and had enough tried to not be victim of âshort term weather changeâ, but got sick due to coming in the contract of rainy water.
There was so much going on inside the university.
Our semester exams got postponed continuously for two times.
Yesterday I wrote second paper of this exam. And the last paper is on 19th of April.
This is a critical time. One should be aware of his or her physical health, mental health, use of time, sleeping patterns and other important issues.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
Here’s a highlight,
âDifferent coloured strings,
Joy it always brings.
A path to heaven,
Just remember the number is seven.â
I must say, you’re good at expressing your thoughts in the form of prose or poetry.â¨đ
I hope you’re okay. Take care, friend.
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I like those rhymings.
They’re a good way to present and finish a poem.
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I haven’t read such a long comment on my blog for a while now.
Hope you are fine now, changing weather is literally a bad sign for our health.
All the best for your exams!
Thank you so much for commenting!đâ¨
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You can compare it as my âwillâ to recognise, participate and give direction to my life.
I don’t want to miss that.
If you got bored I apologise.
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No, in fact I appreciate thatđ
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So beautiful! Untimely rains have damaged crops here.
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Oh yes, it happened in my region toođ
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Love rainbows and the way you describe them.
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Glad you liked it!
Thank you, Rebeccađ
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